An exciting conclusion with a fun twist at the end for this storyline.
 I hate to see this end since I would like to read about what happens
next to these characters.   5 out of 5

A little shorter than other books but still great, just what I
expected. Sorry to see the plot line end. The pony girl action was new
and exciting. Would like to see more of that in future books.  5 out
of 5

The connection between the characters was so well done. The familys
humilating bondage and training was top notch. I found the entire read
to be a serious cock throbber!  5 out of 5

Dissapointed to see the series end. This one like the rest was fun and
stimulating ;) to read. Highly recommended if you enjoy hard B&D and
training.  5 out of 5  (MB)

Great story and smooth read. I've enjoyed all of Dowd's work. He's
become my new favorite author.  5 out of 5  (Dom)

I can't believe we're left to wonder about these womens torturous
futures!!!!! OMG, lets hope this author writes a follow up or 2, the
door is so wide open.    5 out of 5

The author is one of the best authors around.  His stories give you
the feelings that the slaves are feeling.  He has been writing about
mothers/daughters/sisters in a very erotic manner.  If you enjoy bdsm
books, you must have his books in your collection.  I rate his books
excellent to outstanding.  5 out of 5  (Chicago)

This is a 5+ book! I felt part of the womens helpless humilation and
despair. The auction could have easily been expanded to make the tale
longer. I get off on tit tort, training and hum so I really enjoyed
the seriss overall.  5 out of 5  (slaver)

I hope his next series is as good.  5 out of 5  (JBC)

Consistently well written bondage smut. Particularly liked the passage
with Carol. She needs to get more penetrating attention. Perhaps let
her fall out of favour with her masters so she can be demoted to
slave.  5 out of 5  (Mr.pushups)

Among the best I've ever read, sorry the ratings only go to a "5".  5
out of 5  (Eljay)

I give this one an A++  5 out of 5

Excellent! The entire Julie series has been great.  5 out of 5

l have enjoyed the last in this series. it has left me wondering what
will happen next in their lives, and how many babies Jenny bears for
her new owners.  5 out of 5  (saffler)

I normally like this author, don't think this is memorable.  3 out of
5  (JBC)

I really enjoyed this story. It was slow to start as the author set
the stage and developed the characters and then it was full steam
ahead. There is something about Peter King that I really like - a
quality and attention to detail, I think.  5 out of 5  (Hardman)

Very well done book, but more could have been done at the end or maybe
that is then next volume where mom serves daughter  5 out of 5 
(Chicago)

I am looking forward to a continuation of this this story with Beth
and her new roommate.  5 out of 5

Well written with a good story  3 out of 5

This went straight onto my favourites and i have already read it again
and enjoyed it just as much  5 out of 5  (nathanholn)

Really a 3.5.  Ok story based on interesting premise.  Some pretty
good sex scenes  3 out of 5

The exploits of a young man's domination of a mother daughter team are
some what unbelievable to me here. I felt as if the whole escapade was
going to back fire on him at any moment. It felt like a real stretch
however not impossible.  3 out of 5

I hope there is a sequal to this story, I think there is great
potential.  5 out of 5  (JBC)

OK, but just average.   3 out of 5  (Eljay)

Good writing, one of the author's best.  Great scenes as main
character is drawn further into depravity and becomes a "white whore".
 A re-reader for sure, and one of my ATFs.  5 out of 5  (BD)

Jack Norman is always a good story teller it this is no exception.  I
have never been much interested in the Black Pimp/White Whore
stereotype stories which is why this one only gets 4 stars.  While a
little slow in some places the story moves along fast enough to keep
this reader interested.  Give it a try.  4 out of 5  (Stark47)

Very good story with potential for a continuation. Would be interested
in reading more of these characters.  4 out of 5

Well written story, you could imagen being with them  5 out of 5 
(girly)

Up to his usual standard. If you like his books this is one for you. 
5 out of 5

Not one of his best stories.  3 out of 5  (JBC)

Author needs to get a beta reader. Numerous typos & people switching
back & forth from broken English to good English detract from the
story. There are also many times when pronouns are switched between
male & female erroneously. Additionally the characters experience the
same punishments over & over. Some variations to their plight would be
better. When you pay for a book, you expect better.  2 out of 5 
(CrysPeg )

Good but not one of his best  4 out of 5  (JBC)

Argus is consistently one of the best erotic writers around, so even a
mediocre book for him (which this is) has to get 5 stars from me. But
if you're new to Argus, try a different title first, like "Doctor of
Pain" or "The Racist."  5 out of 5

Starts out a little slow. Develops into a good story overall, but
because the first few chapters start slow the last several seems
rushed. Have seen better in his work; he just needed to spend a little
more time developing it more smoothly and more deeply.  Some
additional development during the meat of the story would have added a
lot.  3 out of 5  (clanlover
)

hep on the right track just didn't go the "explode" in me  3 out of 5 
(possum)

This book is ok.  Not overly erotic  3 out of 5  (Chicago)

Very repetive  3 out of 5  (JBC
)

Another verygood story from one of my favourite authors. Peter King
catches the nuance of training and that is the fact slaves learn their
roles by having conditions, rewards and punishments repeatedly applied
to their lives. Few slaves learn instantly - and thus Peter King
brings once again a quality and understanding to what he writes.  5
out of 5  (Hardman)

Imaginative, hot and pretty strong tale of of slave breaking and pony
training.  4 out of 5  (Eljay)

Slow and a bit boring.  1 out of 5

Peter King does it again! A gripping tale of two teens who are
abducted and then skilfully transformed into sex slaves. Recognising
the difference between a natural sub and a dominant enables the
abductors to adjust their training methods accordingly. As usual there
is great attention to detail and the plot is well thought through. 

Graphic descriptions accompany the methods used to turn these beauties
into willing sex slaves. They may be cheerleaders but there are no
pom-poms in sight and the future of these young women lies far from
the side of any sports pitch!

Great reading throughout.  5 out of 5  (Hardman)

Excellent. Really loved the treatment of the girls' acceptance of
their fate. Great sex.  5 out of 5

A good read.  Characters reasonably well done, plot was o.k. And the
scenes were pretty hot.  4 out of 5

to many words and no bdsm  2 out of 5

A fairly good story of a mother/daughter trapped, trained and broken
into slavery. Not very strong in detail but enjoyable.  4 out of 5 
(Eljay)

Great story like a piece of music. Several different themes one after
another all pulled together at the end. Very good finish.  5 out of 5 
(qubert)

Good. I quite enjoyed it. The twists and turns kept it interesting.  4
out of 5  (Fred)

Another great story from Jack Norman. In my estimation this author
just keeps on getting better and better.

A delightful story that fully lives up to what the synopsis says you
are getting - with the bonus you actually get a lot more.

I can`t wait to see what Jack does next!  4 out of 5  (Hardman)

very good book  5 out of 5  (mdc)

This is quite good, arousing, sometimes funny, sometimes anything
but...  4 out of 5  (wabi)

Superbly written story, elaborated personalities, super captivating
bdsm.  5 out of 5  (edsubject)

Have to agree with Editor Dee`s comments in the newsletter. This is
Peter King`s best story to date, a really good slave training one that
I just had to read all in one go. Spell-binding stuff Mr King - more
please!  5 out of 5  (Hardman)

Beginning too slow but the plot was an interesting one.  Liked the
ending but again slow beginning and rushed ending.  The piercing scene
needed more development & specifics and some lower body piercings
would have been nice too.    4 out of 5  (clanlover)

not good ehough  1 out of 5

Almost believable as a true story. A really good read  5 out of 5 
(Jimbo1942)

sorry, but for me this is just `going through the motions´ 
"Same procedure as last year?" "Same procedure as every year."  2 out
of 5  (wabi)

The process of her movement from civilian to slave is nicely
described. Pretty good story, well written  4 out of 5

Provocative and intriguing story line. Nicely paced with engaging
twists. Everything you would expect and more. If you enjoy what the
title suggests and the synopsis, I highly recommend it.  5 out of 5 
(slaver)

Loved it! Excellent continuation of the story, looking forward to
more! I agree with the 1st review, if this genre of book excites you,
trust me, you won't be disappointed.  5 out of 5  (MR)

In the latest book of Julie and her family's enslavement, Dowd
continues to leave the reader on the edge, never knowing the fate of
any of the slaves the Penns own.  The invention of new methods to
encourage submission in combination with the attention to detail
brings the reader in the room where the scenes unfold.
The writer continues to visit moments and places from previous novels,
reminding us how we got where we are in this latest installment of a
great series
A great read.   5 out of 5  (sk)

A very good series. Well worth reading. When will you be writing the
fith book as I would like to know who is the woman in black and what
awaits her.  5 out of 5

Some of the most imaginative bondage and creative torment I've read in
a while. A great series of ebooks!  5 out of 5  (trek)

Wow, and what I expected.  5 out of 5  (tc)

Very good. Have thoroughly enjoyed all the volumes in this series.
I've really started to connect with the entire family and thier
ordeal.  5 out of 5

plodding, unrealistic  2 out of 5

Good read. Could be a little longer. Good five knuckle shuffle
novelette.  5 out of 5  (Mr.pushups)

“Unrealistic” really??? Did this person really not know what they were
buying? This was another great story in true W.L. Dowd style. Not the
best book in the series but still top shelf material.   5 out of 5

A fun read  5 out of 5

A tour-de-force in edgeplay fetishism.  Whoever gave the poor review
obviously doesn't write, or immerse themselves.  5 out of 5 
(HighHeels)

great expectations of this new saga of fetish & lesbian domination.
Like to see more of the "foreplay" of girl capture as in her
Devastation series- but this story is great. buy it.  5 out of 5 
(xanadu)

very good, intense, detailed writing. Lets minds and phantasies
flowing with pleasure. Could not stop reading it until it was
finished. Waiting already for book 2 and more. Agree to other review,
like especially the picking and harvesting, plus preparing/dressing up
for pleasure. Hope to read more of this in the coming books again.  5
out of 5  (Joergstron)

Up to the standard of previous book Hope Farm.  5 out of 5

Very strong, very detailed training of several captives in total
submission, forced lactation, body modifications and breeding.    5
out of 5  (Eljay)

Great book...very depraved and evil.  I thought Devastation was
better, but this one is good as well.  There were some parts that were
repetitive.  4 out of 5  (Pins)

Really poor collection in  general on F/F slave training type stories
and this is no exception.  Too contrived and detailed to be gripping
as a tale and lacks the bite of a true slave training story.  1 out of
5

More bondage technique than feeling of the girls  3 out of 5 
(Chicago)